Loneliness is like absinthe,
The old potion of poets
Of Paris and its quarters
Only to be captured
In words or paint
Sour as you walk,
Feel these droplets of rain
Harder to swallow
The indomitable taste
When offered
The old pain
And in presence amongst us
Like those wild flowers
Scattered in time,
In an unmarked islands
To witness the old mosaics
Survive you may,
But remains in place,
The old prison
Bounded in its fabrication
As fly in spider’s web
Breathless, in our attempts
An appearance for posterity
Learn you may,
From these experiences of past
But bite it will,
The old venom
In its hazel shades
And in its steppes of moments
A noise, unfiltered,
To forget is to rewind
In the oceans of time
The old reference
Carries it the remains
Of our actions and fortunes
Only to be captured
In words random
Too many efforts,
To remain, out of its claws
The old jungle
But beautiful it is,
Like an old sky
Those old footsteps
Of mankind and its marks
In darkened souls
Of adventure and wisdom
The old light
No prices or offers of ransom
Of its beauty and grandeur
As they drink absinthe
The old potion of poets
In the old Latin quarters
For words and for paint!
Kashkin




















5 Comments
July 20, 2008 at 9:07 pm
Beautiful imagery and very unique recreation of loneliness.
The only drawback is that poem is too long and the intensity dissolves after first three stanzas.
But really beautiful.
July 22, 2008 at 12:23 am
Ah, splendid work. Love it. Beautifully detailed imagery indeed.
July 23, 2008 at 12:11 pm
But bite it will,
the old venom
Wah wah
August 13, 2008 at 5:12 pm
Thanks Pringles, Kannathil and Qandeel for your comments on ” Loneliness is like Absinthe”
March 30, 2009 at 7:14 pm
Loneliness!
I abhor to be all alone by myself
Like an old bottle stood on the shelf
Me my swooning soul all alone
with none but my shadow clone
Just there twirling my thumbs
mindless and just plain dumb
every time my silhouette says
How shall we both pass the days
Lonely as ive been for years now
not knowing the where or the how
Now that my shadow too has gone
the dusky grey has left me forlorn
Wept an cried but zilch in return
My heart and soul hurtfully burn
What would be? As the time flies
shall I let bye gones be byes
Speak and tell me How to live
Seek someone who is there to give
surely someone better than me
must rub my eyes to clearly see
original
saadat